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Oct 7, 2023Liked by Yuelian Hong

Beautiful poem!

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thank you!! 🙏💕

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Quality

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thank youuu 🥹🫶

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This is what poetry should be. So much meaning in such simple words.

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ahh what a compliment 🥹

thank you!! 💖

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I liked your repetition contrasting 'the official tongue' and the 'unofficial tongue' and how it added emphasis to the misrepresentation of the truth by your sister's father. Very well done as usual.

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thank you Jeanne 🙏🙏💓💓

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You are skillful of language and so full of heart

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💓💓💓

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What a heartbreaking story. Thank you so much for sharing. It’s nice to hear from you. ♥️

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thank youu 🥲🫶

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